ch 8

jack is really trying to ruin my life, he has argued with me again and we have separated into two tribes. I like my tribe better because the leader is me. personally I don't think that jack knows how to lead a tribe he only knows how to lead a tribe of choir boys.

I really don't like this new jack that we have been seeing all after he killed the pig. so in my opinion of jack never killed the pig then I think that he would be the same. I'm upset with him now from this point and on I don't think that we will get along. I have a sense on what might happen next but I'm not quite sure yet because you know with jack being a new leader anything can happen.
If I had to say how I felt about this, well I wouldn't really be able to say anything good about all of this. I think that jack is jealous of the way I do things and I think that he thinks life is a game. he doesn't see that we really have to survive like this isn't a video game or choir rehearsal
. we don't get to go home unless we are rescued but its not clear to jack all he wants to do is kill pigs and be ho he wants to be, not survive.

final draft

I couldn't believe the way jack was acting on the island. so I had to separate myself from him. well I'm having a good time by my self, because no one was there to say anything to me. You know the crazy thing though is that I don't really think that were going home. I mean yes I know I haven't been home in a long time so I might not be able to recognize it but I'm telling you that this doesn't look good. While I was on the ship we saw another ship heading our was but instead of avoiding it we slowed down. when we came to a stop the boats were side to side. On the other boat you could see other children but they looked like they were dressed up in choir clothes.

It was really weird but in  few seconds jack had came out from the bottom of the boat and he ran across the plank and hugged this man. I was thinking that maybe they were related and you know jack and the man came onto our ship and were talking to the captain.

I was listening by the door and I could hear them talking about there home and how things were before the plane crash. then I heard him call the man his dad, and I was confused. I really didn't expect that to happen but it did. so while they were talking I went back downstairs and talked to the boys saying that jack was going to leave them, they weren't to happy because jack had told them if he gets rescued they would go with him. they knew form that point on that jack had lied to them. We all came up with a plan, our plan was to capture jack and tie him up. Then we could draw a lot of attention to his dad and the men and after that we could sail away with the other boat. We stuck with our plan and it worked we scared his dad and he ran to his son, we got on the ship and we sailed away happily ever after. I also got my tribe back.